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This is the longest I've polished a fic, I'm trying to do better at avoiding talking heads, telling rather than showing, and the dread said bookism. I hopefully won't end up making other mistakes instead.
This is also the first time I've written a spell card duel, which doesn't have any style rules that I'm aware of. Special thanks to Murasa for having easy-to-describe patterns. Please don't drown me.
I'm also probably the first person to sexualize the mock kidnappings Akyuu mentioned, though I think I may have overdone it. You'd think Touhou ero doujins would've jumped on that, but I guess that requires more imagination that tentacles, anons, or random sex.
This is also the first time I've written a spell card duel, which doesn't have any style rules that I'm aware of. Special thanks to Murasa for having easy-to-describe patterns. Please don't drown me.
I'm also probably the first person to sexualize the mock kidnappings Akyuu mentioned, though I think I may have overdone it. You'd think Touhou ero doujins would've jumped on that, but I guess that requires more imagination that tentacles, anons, or random sex.
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Once again very well done, and I actually didn't find any grammar errors!
I suppose this is the end of the story, but it was very well written, and I look forward to your future works. ^^
I suppose this is the end of the story, but it was very well written, and I look forward to your future works. ^^